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Request from =Drakizora

Ummm....not much to say. Lol.

I guess?

Kardia belongs to =Drakizora

Art belongs to meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...................
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Hello Accacclia (sorry if I don't know how to spell your name). Since I'm not sure to critique on, I'll critique on the anatomy. Now, I am not trying to be mean, and actually trying to help you improve, so please keep this in mind!

Sorry if I'm tad bit harsh , because there are a lot of things that need to be fixed and keep on appearing over and over again. I'm also trying to help you, OK? Not be mean and such.

The head is one of your biggest issues with cats I can see. Cats have smaller heads than what your draw. Their ears and also much more smaller and not huge chinchilla ears. The tuffet is OK, as long as you downsize it a bit. Also, the mouth, eyes, and nose are placed down to much and overall the head should be more compact and downsized.

The cat's body always appears to be kind of fat (no offence) and needs to be skinnier. But in here the stomach is fine. The legs look chubby and paws are huge - just make them skinnier and less clunky. Now, you have the all mystifying back leg problem most feline artist have problems with, which is that 'lump' on the back legs. They're very subtle actually, but still there. When standing, they shouldn't be so huge, but while sitting, they should be more noticed to give the cat more structure.

Also, the tail is fine as long as you make it skinnier.

Overall, your cats need to be more compact, skinnier, and the heads also need improvement the most too.

That's all I have to say. And please try to incooperate my advice in some of your drawings next time - they will improve a lot faster. OK, bye!

~ From Katty